Good stuff. Central message is clearly presented, but details of the story are a bit lacking. The viewer is left unsure of details of the story. Also, just a formatting thing, the text at the bottom of a few of the slides get cut off and are unreadable.
Slide 4 and 5 have text that run off the bottom of the page. Slide 8 and 13 should have some text explaining the images. Besides that you have a good and concise presentation. You didnt write a book like shabby and i didnt age 3 years while reading yours. Good job.
We think you did a great job as using the multimedia aspect to keep the reader's attention. The pictures were really good and effectively conveyed the central message and the tone of the movie. We did that on a couple of the slides, the information did get cutoff on the bottom. J and J
- I liked your pictures, especially the scenery - Also, I would work on organization on some of the slides - On some of the slides, I would elaborate more, such as the Denying and Accepting slides. Maybe give more examples? - Also, if it is possible, some your slides are cut off...but I think you know that.
Good stuff. Central message is clearly presented, but details of the story are a bit lacking. The viewer is left unsure of details of the story. Also, just a formatting thing, the text at the bottom of a few of the slides get cut off and are unreadable.
ReplyDeleteSlide 4 and 5 have text that run off the bottom of the page. Slide 8 and 13 should have some text explaining the images. Besides that you have a good and concise presentation. You didnt write a book like shabby and i didnt age 3 years while reading yours. Good job.
ReplyDeleteWe think you did a great job as using the multimedia aspect to keep the reader's attention. The pictures were really good and effectively conveyed the central message and the tone of the movie. We did that on a couple of the slides, the information did get cutoff on the bottom.
ReplyDeleteJ and J
- I liked your pictures, especially the scenery
ReplyDelete- Also, I would work on organization on some of the slides
- On some of the slides, I would elaborate more, such as the Denying and Accepting slides. Maybe give more examples?
- Also, if it is possible, some your slides are cut off...but I think you know that.
-Shabby & Isha